In class we been writing a recount from another person perspective Here’s what I have written about Phoebe’s holidays.
It started when Phoebe got up at 5:30. Phoebe drove to Seymour with her mum and her brother. When’s she got to Seymour she hoped on the train .
Phoebe went to Melbourne with money in her pocket her brother Hayden had money as well he had $30 because it was he birthday and Phoebe got $20 to spend and she spend it on shopkins her brother spend his money on a new Xbox 360 game Terreia they bought there things in Docklands . They had lunch in Docklands they had Degani’s for lunch they had a lovely pizza.
On the 2nd week on Wednesday she went swimming with her Brother,Nan and her pop at the best swimming pools Aquamoves.
Phoebe’s cousin come to her house her name was Evie she came from Perth and she might be moving to Rushworth. Evie and Phoebe had lunch together they had a lovly home made keish and they had a homemade ice-cream with cherry ripe and peppermint crisp. It was a bad thing that she got sick. Meanwhile phoebe’s perents were renovating there Kichen .When phoebe was watching the afl grand final she heard a bike coming to her house she ran out side and got the letter off the postmanand it was a letter from Macy saying ” HI”! AND THAT WAS PHOEBE AMAZING HOLIDAYS.


